tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post3057893118434680992..comments2023-05-05T10:31:30.340+01:00Comments on Meet Fifty Shades - Christian Grey's Story By G E Griffin: Chapter 5 - Breakfast, Paperwork and ElevatorsChristian Greyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comBlogger68125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-85775788333200148242015-05-13T18:52:31.340+01:002015-05-13T18:52:31.340+01:00Good point, Sherry. Guess I wasn't thinking st...Good point, Sherry. Guess I wasn't thinking straight when I went through naming the chapters. I shall have to have a bit of a rethink!Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-90952205331639452372015-05-10T04:33:18.430+01:002015-05-10T04:33:18.430+01:00I am re-reading your story yet again and noticed t...I am re-reading your story yet again and noticed that you have now titled each chapter. I am curious why this chapter is "Breakfast at Escala" when they are actually in The Heathman Hotel in Portland. Just an observation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731257419861359991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-57418889608362927142015-05-05T19:11:10.048+01:002015-05-05T19:11:10.048+01:00I'm enjoying your writing so far...but having ...I'm enjoying your writing so far...but having just finished 50 Shades Freed, it's noticeable how in here, almost every one of Christian's reactions to anything Ana does or says is sexual and sometimes violent. Don't get me wrong, he is known to be a sexual human being but it felt like in EL James' last book, not every reaction of his was just sexual - like when Ana recognized a piece of artwork in his office and said "taking ordinary to extraordinary" and he was attracted to how smart she was or when he had asked Ana about Katherine and she would talk more about Katherine than about herself and he was attracted to that because it made her seem caring and not self-centered. Just my two cents - it made him a little more likeable. I'm still enjoying your writing though and will continue to read. Thank you.Yimmiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04565668381281371102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-60797572147639536062015-05-05T19:09:13.198+01:002015-05-05T19:09:13.198+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Yimmiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04565668381281371102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-34230373248367990892015-04-19T22:33:02.831+01:002015-04-19T22:33:02.831+01:00actually enjoying this book series more then the o...actually enjoying this book series more then the original! now i know whats going on in Ana's head for three whole books, its refreshing to see it all from Christians point of view! <3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-79562334890866132412014-09-05T04:11:50.948+01:002014-09-05T04:11:50.948+01:00I love this blog...can't get enough of it...I ...I love this blog...can't get enough of it...I hate to say that I read it too many times....I can't wait for the movie but until then I will get my fix from here.....so Thanks!!!!..... love it!!!!! Carry on. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-79109757135962391702014-08-20T06:53:55.361+01:002014-08-20T06:53:55.361+01:00I found your story a few hours ago. I only knew o...I found your story a few hours ago. I only knew of one other author whose story was taken off of FF. She had girl on girl sex in her story so I guess they didn't like it. I'm anxious to get to the part where they thought yours was too explicit. I'm enjoying your story.sarabohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08553984906321795953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-91760265737857335752013-02-22T23:00:23.272+00:002013-02-22T23:00:23.272+00:00Elliot is the eldest :)Elliot is the eldest :)Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-76419364003041518102013-02-22T21:35:14.695+00:002013-02-22T21:35:14.695+00:00Who is actually older Elliot or Christian? Who is actually older Elliot or Christian? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-22535047270559974162013-01-22T17:09:53.745+00:002013-01-22T17:09:53.745+00:00Thanks, CC. When I first started writing this, the...Thanks, CC. When I first started writing this, there weren't actually that many FSOG out there, but things have certainly snowballed since then. I don't read many other versions, that way I know whatever I write has come from my imagination, and any similarities are coincidental. As you say, it's bound to happen that the same things come up. <br /><br />Thanks for reading, anyhow :)Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-44230336332499895622013-01-22T06:14:38.162+00:002013-01-22T06:14:38.162+00:00Interesting comment from "Lin". There a...Interesting comment from "Lin". There are so many Christian POV's especially on FF, one could choose to read any of them. I started by reading a POV called, "A Walk In the Clouds". It started from the very beginning, writing the complete series from Christian's POV. I have read so many of FF stories that I am getting to know the characters from several points of view. I am enjoying reading yours! It's interesting that some of the scenarios are the same! I guess there can only be so many avenues to go with! Well, I'm hanging in there and can't wait to catch up to the chapter you are on now. Keep up the good work. Judi Cuypershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08276682888228933077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-52796710561767619412013-01-11T18:06:54.793+00:002013-01-11T18:06:54.793+00:00Hi again, Lin. Trust me, I'm not offended. I&#...Hi again, Lin. Trust me, I'm not offended. I'm more than happy for any sort of constructive criticism and feedback, and of course I understand that not everyone is going to be a huge fan. You can't please everyone, after all. And yes, I do think my writing has developed as time has gone on, and also Christian does change from being an arrogant arsehole, to a not quite so arrogant not so much of an arsehole by the end of things. <br /><br />But at least you seem to be sticking around to give my blog a fair chance!<br /><br />Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-86482156246484790142013-01-11T17:28:29.638+00:002013-01-11T17:28:29.638+00:00Dunno if it's growing on me, or if you actuall...Dunno if it's growing on me, or if you actually get better as the chapters progress, but I am devouring it as no other. Still not desiring Christian, but I do love how you write him. His insecurities. Of course he is still unsufferably stuffed with his self-importance, but the more he falls in love with Ana, the less it shows. :) <br /><br />And yeah, I know I've always had the choice not to read, I know that. I really tried hard to give a constructive criticism rather than just be an asshole and shoot you down. Sorry I am just not as madly positive as everyone else seems to be. <br /><br />Thanks for the reply though. Don't be offended.Linnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-6377246719716126142013-01-09T05:24:58.228+00:002013-01-09T05:24:58.228+00:00Omg I'm so addicted i finds myself reading all...Omg I'm so addicted i finds myself reading all the chapters over and over you are a genius can't get enough :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-89857147998199660242013-01-08T20:02:21.792+00:002013-01-08T20:02:21.792+00:00Fair enough, Lin. If this isn't for you, then ...Fair enough, Lin. If this isn't for you, then I suggest you don't bother reading it. Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-36233238145095015432013-01-08T19:47:47.949+00:002013-01-08T19:47:47.949+00:00While I think it's a good job for actually get...While I think it's a good job for actually getting the words down with more or less proper grammar and spelling, I cannot say you write particularly well, sorry. There's something that really makes Christian smell like a pretentious asshole to me, the way he goes "oh I am rich, so rich" in his own mind. There are hot parts, hotter than what EL ever managed and the whole premise is just as delicious as it was in Twilight (which I never read). I just think you could probably do even better, make Christian Grey actually seem like a man worth desiring. <br /><br />And no, I am too lazy and probably not good enough to explain how exactly either, I just know yours isn't quite nailing it for me. Still, hat off for doing the work.Linnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-88116039935928570142012-12-24T17:57:58.236+00:002012-12-24T17:57:58.236+00:00what took you so long to find it?what took you so long to find it?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10140608200822456935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-5776087303283741762012-12-19T17:05:08.882+00:002012-12-19T17:05:08.882+00:00 I just started reading this and I am already add... I just started reading this and I am already addicted !! You have managed to capture the characters so very well! Please continue writing, amazed by your work !- Thank You and Laters!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-61886854215935767382012-12-06T00:47:14.363+00:002012-12-06T00:47:14.363+00:00Every time I read a new chapter, my heart flutters...Every time I read a new chapter, my heart flutters a beat. Impressive work, looking forward to reading more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-64068812857731727372012-12-03T07:16:32.130+00:002012-12-03T07:16:32.130+00:00On dirait vraiment que c'est la pensée d'u...On dirait vraiment que c'est la pensée d'un mec!<br /><br />Fleur50Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-1965118350036074282012-11-30T07:09:43.463+00:002012-11-30T07:09:43.463+00:00This was awesome! Thank you! You're an aweso...This was awesome! Thank you! You're an awesome writer. Your making me so hot! ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-26175309398597232612012-11-10T09:50:23.277+00:002012-11-10T09:50:23.277+00:00Thanks God,I have found your blog!Thanks for shari...Thanks God,I have found your blog!Thanks for sharing this blog.That was I was looking for after I have finished all 3 books.Carry on ...!Please, Thank you :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01360017867258332956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-7479879774089242292012-10-31T08:06:53.420+00:002012-10-31T08:06:53.420+00:00Have to keep all these goddesses happy don't w...Have to keep all these goddesses happy don't we?Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-88509703549154135992012-10-31T08:06:25.660+00:002012-10-31T08:06:25.660+00:00Glad you found your way to my blog :)Glad you found your way to my blog :)Christian Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07202337786652508385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5172449820177228414.post-42184519274341874212012-10-31T05:00:06.018+00:002012-10-31T05:00:06.018+00:00Greysession fulfilled reading this blog!!! I was ...Greysession fulfilled reading this blog!!! I was going through withdrawals but you have resurrected my inner goddess!!!vargaswhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13299269474992843005noreply@blogger.com